| LECTURE – POETRY
#2—Structure If we take a look at My Papa’s Waltz [which is on page 102 of your textbook] we can see that this is a rhyming poem. For example, in the first stanza “the whiskey on you breath could make a small boy dizzy but I hung on like death such waltzing was not easy.” We can see that the second and forth lines rhyme. Now when we analyze a poem, we like to take a look at how it is organized and in fact poems are organized in stanzas, which are like paragraphs. If you take a look at My Papa’s Waltz, you can see that it is organized into four stanzas. {Then every stanza we to take a look, is it a couplet of two lines, a tersest of three lines, or a quatrain of four lines.} My Papa’s Waltz is in quatrains, they’re all four lines. Now there are other poems like Sonnets that have a lot more lines than quatrains, but we often then break them down into smaller pieces. There are many poem types, for example Epithalamium a poem about a wedding, Elegies a poem to the dead, and pastoral poems are about nature. I’ve not worried about you memorizing different poem types - what I really want you to do is focus on the structure of the poem, because sometimes the structure leads to a better understanding of the meaning. For example, from My Papa’s Waltz we can see that every stanza kind of moves a little bit, the first part talks about the whiskey on his breath and hanging on, the next stanza talks about being in the kitchen, the next stanza talks about the dance itself, and finally the last stanza it’s taking him off to bed, so you can see those stanzas are there to break up time and show us movement in the poem. #3—Analyzing Poetry #4—Words Diction is a choice of words, for example if you describe a car crash and you call it an accident that’s a very different image then if I said two cars smashed into one another. So the choice of words can make a big difference in how we perceive the poem. The Syntax is the order of words. For example if someone says hi how are you doing, that’s a regular kind of order of words we’re used to, but if the person says doing how are you - that would kind of surprise us because the order of words were reversed and so we want to pay attention when word orders are different than what we assume. Denotation and Connotation are also very important. Denotation means the literal meaning of the words for example if I said Mary had a cow that’s a literal meaning. Mary is probably a farmer and she owns a cow. However, connotation the implied meaning, if I said Mary had a cow I might mean that she’s really upset - not that she actually owned a cow, and so we have to take a look at the words and decide is it the literal meaning that we want to take or do we want to take a connotated meaning. #5—Figure of Speech We also have Allusions often in our references. An Allusion means the title of the poem or something in the poem will refer to another work maybe, a piece of art, or a person to add depth of meaning. It doesn’t mean the poem is about that actual thing, it means it’s similar. One of the poems you’re going to be reading is called Daedalus and Daedalus is the name of the father of Icarus. So when you read the poem, we know there is an allusion there that Daedalus means a father and he’s probably talking about a son. Now it doesn’t mean it’s exactly the same story about the wings and the boy dying, but it does mean that there’s some kind of connection, and you want to pay attention to that connection as it will help reveal meaning. #6—Figures of Speech Cont. Hyperbole is exaggeration [so for example if I said wow I just ate five million calories in chocolate, I probably didn’t eat that much, over stated.] So you can also have litotes. Litotes is an understatement, it just opposite of hyperbole [so let’s say I ate 10 candy bars, and someone would say, so did you eat a lot of chocolate today, ah, just a tad, so now I’m understating how much chocolate I had]. Paradox and oxymoron are also used in poetry; a paradox is two situations that couldn’t possibly occur at the same time[ for example a man could be alive and dead in a poem at the same time.] An oxymoron combines two contradictory terms one of my favorites is jumbo shrimp. Shrimp means small, and so how you can have jumbo smalls?? - I’m not quite sure, but that would be an example of an oxymoron.
Alliteration means using the same consonant at the beginning of each word [so we can say little lover lacy went down the lane and so we get that same kind of sound over and over again]. If a poet uses alliteration, it’s usually because he or she wants to attract some attention to that line. Assonance means the same vowel sounds close together [so the crook took the book from the nook so we take a look at that] and again if a poet uses assonance, then we know that he or she is trying to get our attention. Now rhyme schemes can be really important. Often what will happen in a poem is we’ll have very similar rhyme schemes. So for example if we take a look at My Papa’s Waltz, if you take a look at the first stanza, you would say it ends on the sounds from breath – “sound A”, the next line dizzy “sound A”, now death rhymes with breath so that would be “sound A” again and such waltzing was not easy, easy rhymes with dizzy that would be “Sound B” again so our rhyme scheme would be a, b, a, b. Rhyme schemes can change - in fact they can be very complicated - you can have abc, abc, you could have a b c b d b, so only every other line rhymes. Rhyme schemes can be really complicated. Take a look at the rhyme scheme, often there will be a change in the poem - somewhere the poem will change its rhyme scheme and that will give us a clue that’s an important line we should take a look at.
Mary had a little lamb-[a] It followed her to school one day-[d] #9—Impressions There’s also symbolism in poetry just like there is in drama and in fiction. For example, a red rose often equals love. If we take a look at My Papa’s Waltz, the waltz itself is kind of a symbol. It’s a dance. Now a waltz is a very formulated dance, and we can kind of see that this symbol for two people moving around together. Perhaps that symbol is supposed to be well regulated dance, we’re kind of seeing that it’s almost ironic - an ironic symbol. So getting on to irony, verbal irony is where one thing is said and another meaning is intended for example you could have a man tell a woman, I love you and we can’t be sure sometimes, does he really mean I love you, or is he being ironic, is he saying, yeah I love you, but because we don’t hear tone of voice in poems we have to really look for other clues to let us know what the author means. |